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Informal Style
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Formal Style
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May use
numerals for numbers
1, 5, 20,
100, 150
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Write
out numbers of one or two words
one, two
hundred, one million
Use numerals
for numbers of three or more words
201, 47.5,
1,005
Use numerals
for dates
July 19, 2001
20 May 2001
Write out
any number beginning a sentence
Twenty-five
thousand dollars was more than he could afford.
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My use
contractions
can’t,
won’t, shouldn’t
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Write out
all contractions
cannot, will
not, should not
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May use
first, second, or third person pronouns:
1st I, me, we, us
2nd you
3rd he, she, it, they, them
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Keep writing
entirely in third person, or use first person sparingly.
Eliminate
second person (you) entirely; substitute he, she, they, a person,
people, one, or another noun.
Resist the
temptation to overuse the impersonal one:
Impersonal:
One finds the hottest temperatures in
equatorial zones.
Revised:
The hottest temperatures can be found in equatorial
zones.
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May
abbreviate to save time and space.
U.S., Feb.,
TV, N.Y.
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Spell out
most abbreviations
United
States, February, television, New York
Never use
etc. or &
May use
abbreviations in standard use (never written out)
Mr., Mrs.,
PhD, a.m., p.m.
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May use
slang or colloquial expressions
a lot, kids,
guy, jerk, mess around, swipe, awesome, blab, etc.
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Eliminate
slang and colloquial expressions.
Substitute many,
much, a great deal, or a specific amount for a lot.
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updated
01/07/03 D.Hogan
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