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The Research Process | MLA Format


THE RESEARCH PROCESS

Topic selection 

The form of your research depends on your audience and purpose.  If your teacher asks you to give a one-minute speech on “weapons used during World War II” to provide the class with background knowledge, then your topic, audience, and purpose have been determined for you.  If you decide to research chemistry departments at West Coast colleges for yourself, then your research process will probably be very different.   

However, there are some general guidelines for topic selection:

1.    Select an interesting topic:  Find a way to write about something that interests you.  If you’ve been given a topic, try to find an original angle.  If you’re choosing your own topic, you might start by brainstorming questions that you’d like answered or topics you want to know more about.  You also might want to reflect on current controversies, look over your lecture notes, or skim through your textbook to get more ideas. 

 

2.    Think about your topic:  Before running to the computer and typing your topic into a search engine, think about what you already know and what you need to find out.  Are you interested in the who, what, when, where, why, or how of the issue?  Do you know where to look to find that information?  (See Types of Sources below.) 

  3.    Do preliminary research:  Discover what sources and information are out there BEFORE deciding on a final topic.  You may discover that there’s too much or too little information on the topic you have chosen.  You may also discover that there aren’t enough reputable sources from which you can draw.  (See Evaluating Sources below.)

 

4.    Revise and/or limit your topic:  Now that you know what information is out there, make sure your topic fits your purpose.  You might have to expand or contract your topic depending on whether you’re writing a business proposal, a persuasive speech, or an eight-page essay.  At this point, it’s appropriate to write a research question or thesis statement that will guide the rest of your research.

Types of sources

Once you have a working research question or thesis statement, it’s time to continue your research.  Here are the types of sources that you might use:

  Primary and Secondary Sources

A primary source is an original source that gives information directly.  That means that the information has not been summarized, interpreted, or explained by someone else.  Primary source documents include personal interviews, surveys, experiments, and original-source documents like the Constitution, a novel, or an autobiography. 

  Examples of primary sources: 

  • Interview with a Holocaust survivor 

  • Survey of students about their knowledge of the events of the Holocaust 

  • WWII photographs or maps of concentration camps

  • Night by Elie Weisel (autobiography)

  A secondary source is not an original source.  It is removed from the original because someone has extended the primary information by summarizing, analyzing, interpreting, or evaluating it.  Secondary source documents include newspaper, magazine, encyclopedia, and journal articles, as well as documentaries, biographies, literary criticism, and websites. 

  Examples of secondary sources: 

  • Pamphlet from the Museum of Tolerance  

  • CBS Documentary on the Holocaust  

  • Books or articles by experts about the events of the Holocaust 

  • History textbook

  • Website: http://www.holocaustsurvivors.org

Print Sources  

  • BooksNewspapers Magazines
  • Journals Encyclopedias Almanacs
  • Pamphlets  
  • Taking Sides  
  • CQ Researcher  

Internet & electronic versions of print sources (databases)

  • SIRS
  • Gale Group
  • Infotrac
  • Personal website
  • Professional website
  • E-mail
  • On-line periodical
  • Listserv posting
  • E-text  
Other sources
  • Film, radio, or TV program
  • Speech or lecture
  • Audio recording
  • Interview
  • Work of art

Searching the Internet  

Hint: 

 For more information on using search engines and subject directories, see:  

The Spider's Apprentice:  A Helpful Guide to Web Search Engines

 

When searching the Internet, a web directory (such as Yahoo http://www.yahoo.com) is a good place to start. A web directory organizes related web sites into subject categories. For example, to find sites on the Constitution on Yahoo, you would select

Government>Documents>Constitutions>United States.

A search engine (such as Google http://www.google.com) will find specific key words within web pages.  Many web directories have search engines built in to their systems. To use a search engine, follow the guidelines for keyword searching below.

 

Keyword searching

To search the Internet or a database by keyword, you type in the important word or words you are looking for.  Do not include articles, prepositions, or other small words. When searching by keyword, you should be as specific as possible.  You might need to try several different terms in order to find useful information.

Example:          cloning             Shakespeare                 World War II

If you are looking for words in a particular order, for example, a phrase, title, or name, you should put the entire phrase in quotation marks.  Remember that the search engine will look for EXACT matches for anything in quotation marks, so make sure that spelling and capitalization are correct.

Example:          “American Heart Association”                “Romeo and Juliet”       

                        “stem cell”                                            “Pearl Harbor”

If you type in several words in a keyword search, your results will often include pages that have only one of the words, not all.  If you want all of the terms to appear in the results, then type AND or + between each word.  If you want either of the words to appear, use OR.  

Example:          heart AND diet             “Romeo and Juliet” OR Shakespeare     

If you want to exclude certain terms from your results, type NOT or – before the word you don’t want.

Example:          nirvana AND Buddhism NOT Cobain

Once you find a useful site, some search engines have a “Find Similar Pages” option.  You can also look on the site itself for other links to useful resources.

 

Evaluating sources

 

Many sources, particularly on the Internet, aren’t legitimate for research use.  Some are out-of-date; others come from non-expert sources; still others are created for shock value. 

Use the following checklist to evaluate the quality of the sources you’re using:

·        Text Box: What should you believe?  
  
Can you tell which of the following cloning sites is legitimate and which is a spoof?  
  
http://www.d-b.net/dti/ 
  
http://www.humancloning.org/

Is the information current?

·        Is the information complete?

·        Is the information accurate?

·        Is the source an expert?

·        Is the source biased?

  You can also evaluate websites by looking at the web address’s domain name. 

By doing this you can determine what type of organization is sponsoring the website and maybe even predict potential bias before looking at the site.  The best research sites are usually posted by universities, government agencies, and other reputable organizations, as opposed to individuals’ personal sites.

  The following are the most commonly used domains:  

·        .edu -- educational site (usually a university or college)

·        .gov – U.S. governmental/ non-military site

·        .com -- commercial business site, includes news organizations

·        .mil – U.S. military sites and agencies

·        .net -- networks, internet service providers, organizations

·        .org – U.S. non-profit organizations and others

The Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) http://www.icann.org/tlds/ has also designated the following domains for use:

·        .aero -- restricted use by air transportation industry

·        .biz -- general use by businesses

·        .coop -- restricted use by cooperatives

·        .info -- general use by both commercial and non-commercial sites

·        .museum -- restricted use by museums

·        .name -- general use by individuals 

·        .pro -- restricted use by certified professionals and professional entities

Hint:  You can include a domain name in your web search.  For example, searching for cloning .gov would

 bring up all the cloning sites sponsored by government agencies. 

 
 

Note taking        

Once you find good sources, you should begin taking notes.  Some teachers require students to use one particular note-taking method to ensure that they have research tools for future assignments.  However, whether you’re jotting notes on napkins or on your laptop, some guidelines are the same:

 Include a key word or phrase as a topic or “slug” so you’ll remember what you were thinking when you wrote information down.  ·        Include the source name or number (see Bibliography Cards) as well as the

page number where you found the information.  This should make parenthetical documentation easy when you sit down to write.  (You will need to cite your sources, even if you paraphrase someone else’s ideas.) 

·        Use quotation marks whenever you copy information word-for-word.

·        Only write down relevant information. (Your goal isn’t to fill a notecard quota.)

·        Use ellipses (…) whenever you leave words out of a quotation.

·        Use [square brackets] whenever you add words to a quotation.

 

Documenting Sources

 

It’s important to write down all of the relevant bibliographic information for each source before you return it or forget where you found it.  You will need this information later when you cite your sources in your paper.  If you are taking notes on a sheet of paper or on your computer, you should write this information at the top of each page or section. If you are using notecards, make a separate bibliography card for each source.

 

Bibliography cards

 

A bibliography card lists the publishing information of each source in MLA format on a separate notecard.  This information will be used for your Bibliography or Works Cited page.  You should number your source cards and use these same numbers in your research notes, an efficient way of matching notes and sources.

Text Box: 1
  
Daunt, Tina. “A War on Soda and Candies in Schools.” Los Angeles Times. 26 August 2001: B-1. Gale Group Student Resource Center. 2 Sept. 2002. <http://www.galenet.com>.
.

bibliography citation in

proper MLA format

 
 

 

 

 

 

 


Notecards

 

Using 3x5 or 4x6 notecards allows researchers to write down information whenever and wherever they find it and then organize that information by rearranging the cards.  Traditional notecards have a designated space for researchers to write down their source, page numbers, and a key word (or slug). 


Notecard with direct quote

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Notecard with paraphrase

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Notecard with secondary quotation (attributed)

slug

 

source number

 
 

Text Box: 1			SCHOOL RESPONSIBILITY

"When you have this marketplace of junk and soda everywhere else, it undermines the good habits that parents are trying to instill. Frankly, schools should not make an unhealthy alliance in order to seek profit. That is not the purpose of a school."

CA State Senator Martha Escutia, sponsor of bill to eliminate junk food sales in schools		(B-1)

Speaker’s full name, title, and relevant info

 

 Cornell Notes

 


You might have learned how to take Cornell Notes during lectures, and the same method can be used for taking research notes.  These notes are written on the right hand side of a regular-size piece of paper, and the “slug” and other notes are written on the left side.  This note-taking method gives the researcher more space to write commentary and is an alternative to writing on note cards.  The disadvantage of this method is that the information is not easy to rearrange, but this arranging can be done during the drafting process. 

 

Sample Cornell Notes:

 

Daunt, Tina. “A War on Soda and Candies in Schools.” Los Angeles Times. 26 August 2001: B-1. Gale Group Student Resource Center. 2 Sept. 2002. <http://www.galenet.com>.

 

 

NOTES TO SELF

NOTES FROM SOURCES:

 

slug or topic

 
VENDING MACHINE $$$

 


Vending machines bring in a lot of money for the soda companies – students spend their money on soda not healthy food (reason to ban soda sales)

 

Vending machines in U.S. schools make more than $750 million per year. (B-1)

 

 

thoughts on the significance or importance of the quotation

 
VENDING CONTRACT $$$

 

Schools make money from contracts with companies that pay for needed supplies and extra curricular activities (reason against banning soda sales)

“Recently, the Sweetwater Union High School District in Chula Vista signed an exclusive deal with Pepsi that is expected to bring at least $4.45 million to its 20 schools over the next 10 years—money that will help pay for library books, intramural sports and school-to-career programs.” (B-1)

 

SCHOOL RESPONSIBILITY

 

Schools shouldn’t be selling junk food to kids – they should set a good example. (reason to ban soda sales)

"When you have this marketplace of junk and soda everywhere else, it undermines the good habits that parents are trying to instill. Frankly, schools should not make an unhealthy alliance in order to seek profit. That is not the purpose of a school."

 

CA State Senator Martha Escutia, sponsor of bill to eliminate junk food sales in schools (B-1)


Text Box: The Purdue University On Line Writing Lab has a number of pages that explain how to paraphrase, cite sources, and complete research papers. See 
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research
 

Paraphrasing

 

There are two ways of taking notes on someone else’s work, either quote the source directly or paraphrase it.  Paraphrasing is not a play-by-play retelling of everything that happened in a selection and is not just a process of substituting synonyms for the words of the original. 

A paraphrase captures a source’s main ideas in your own words yet is more detailed than a summary (see Forms of Writing)

 

Here are some guidelines for paraphrasing:

·        Only include the essential information

·        State important ideas clearly and concisely

·        Use quotation marks around key words or phrases taken directly from the source

·        Arrange the ideas in a logical order that’s easy for the reader to understand

·        Avoid plagiarism (see below)

 

 

Plagiarism

 

According to the MLA Handbook for Writers of Research Papers, “Plagiarism is the act of using another person’s ideas or expressions in your writing without acknowledging the source.  The word comes from the Latin word plagiarius (‘kidnapper’)” (21).

 

Plagiarism includes:

Text Box: Do I have to cite everything?  
 
Facts, such as dates, that can be found in more than two sources are common knowledge and need not be cited.

1.      cutting and pasting from the internet (or any other source)

 

2.      copying word-for-word without using quotation marks

 

3.      lifting particularly apt phrases from the original and including them in your writing without quotation marks

 

4.      replacing a few words with synonyms but keeping the basic sentence structure (syntax) the same

 

5.      paraphrasing information but not indicating its source within the text of your paper using parenthetical citations; simply putting a bibliography citation at the end is not enough

 


 

Original Passage

 

The major concerns of Dickenson’s poetry, early and late, her “flood subjects,” may be defined as the seasons and nature, death and a problematic afterlife, the kinds and phases of love, and poetry as the divine art.

 

Gibson and Williams.  The Literary History of the United States.  Vol. 1.  (906)

 

 

Plagiarized Passage

 

The chief subjects of Emily Dickenson’s poetry include nature and the seasons, death and the afterlife, the types and stages of love, and poetry as the divine art.

 

Acceptable Use

 

Gibson and Williams suggest that the chief subjects of Emily Dickenson’s poetry include nature, death, love, and “poetry as the divine art” (901).

 

 

 

Five Ways to Avoid Plagiarism:

 

1.      Don’t wait until the last minute to do your assignment. 

 

2.      When copying information from original sources, be careful to use quotation marks around direct quotes and include page numbers.  This is especially important in the note-taking phase. 

 

3.      Read through the material you are researching and make sure you understand it.  Then put it aside and write down the key ideas without looking at it.

 

4.      Don’t write your paper with the original sources in front of you.  Use note cards with paraphrases of source material instead. 

 

5.      Understand what you are trying to say before you start to write.

 

 


Outlining

 

Outlining helps writers to organize their research and their ideas before and during drafting. 

 

A working outline might start off as a simple list of ideas that are chunked together into groups.  This outline should evolve throughout the research and writing process as the researcher discovers new information and narrows/expands the research topic (see example below).   Some writers like to create this outline after doing preliminary research, so that they can use key words from their outline as the key words on their notecards. 

 

A formal outline is often required after research has been done and before drafting begins. 

This outline usually uses Roman numerals, capital letters, numbers, and lower-case letters to show subordinate ideas (see example below).  In addition, parallel structure is required (see parallel structure).